Having received a healthy dose of feedback from a number of sources, the fine revision process for Arbiters' Child can finally begin. I was pleasantly surprised that the most troubling sections are fairly ambiguous, and while consistency is an issue, the largest change I need to make is simply redrafting for clarity.
The other major issue within the piece is its inherently abstract nature, in which I have struggled to ground the reader. If I can figure out a way to give the reader a concrete starting point, the abstraction will be less invasive and easier to explore.
Sunday, January 31, 2010
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